托福考试高分作文模板。先来看两段例子！第一段是不好的例子，第二段是好的例子。
Nowadays, thanks to the development of Internet, we are exposed to a vast ocean of information. Some argue that so much information brings a great benefit to our life and study. But for me, the experience with surfing Internet leads me to believe that accessing much information cause more problems than it solves。
Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education. Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at. I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that preparing for careers should have primary consideration。
作为阅文无数的无老师，当看到第一篇文章的时候，已经没有了当初得的兴奋，因为这样的文章实在是太常见了！首先Nowadays这个单词是被无数老师推崇的“高级”单词-_-！！！无老师一直无法理解，为什么有的单词会更高级。然后thanks to节宾语，天呐！多么明显的模板！当我往下看的时候，我只能无意识的检查是否有语法错误，没有语法错误的话，我也就只能给个一般的分数就好了。
但是当无老师看到第二篇文章的时候，初看觉得此文写得不错。用词准确地道，而且完全是自己完成没有模板，但是当我回头再一回味这篇文章的时候，惊讶的发现，这篇文章竟然也是由模板所出！首先Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education。看似平淡无奇，但是实际上Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to就是一个模板，更厉害的是下一句！Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at。这么长的一句话，竟然只有最后3个单词不是模板！然后再接下来，下一句的“given the chance, ”其实对于整句话来说根本就没有任何实际上语义的改变！但适当加进来之后，我们会感觉到非常的地道！之所以无老师感觉如此震惊，原因非常简单，就是因为在这篇文章身上完全看不出半点模板的影子，为什么看不出模板的影子呢？就是因为这篇文章的模板是完全原创的，哪怕不是原创的，也是仅在小范围内流传的！而且这篇文章后面类似的妙手不计其数！
